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DSC-H50 10/600 second F/3.2 10 mm 160 Apr 22, 2009, 6:58:08 AM Share
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The grass sort of forms a distracting cross pattern that the single drop gets lost in. Instead of being drawn to the droplet, my eyes are leading me to other blades of grass.
The bokeh is pretty unattractive, and I think that's what hurts this image the most. The background is somewhat busy, and that confuses the eye and takes it away from the point of interest, the drop.
I think this could be a better shot if a shallower DOF was used to better isolate the droplet.
It's a commendable effort, unfortunately, it lacks vision, and ultimately lacks impact.
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